Changes to the ANB Story (exclusively)

[A Magic Student]

Yeah, the parents deaths are intense. However, the hope is that it will pay off in the third installment when the team splits up. That Sparx will forgive Cynder because he’d understand that she was not herself when it happened. Since then, she has been a true friend and Sparx will feel he’s mistreated her this whole time. So they make up. That’s the idea anyway.

I agree on the age thing you said, but I need to think about it more.

I know you’re fairly new here and that you seem to favor LoS, do you have any changes you’d make to a new beginning?