Spyro movie V.8.9
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SOOOOOooooo... I started this along time ago.  3 years to be exact.  After reading a post about someone else wanting to do this I backed out and set it off to the side.  However, in the last month or so I picked it back up and decided to finish it, with some inspiration coming from what someone else wrote.  I will give you all the first part of the script.

This was a passion project for me, and one I only want to share with people who like Spyro.  So this post is meant for you guys only.  I would be happy to read all Questions, comments, and YES, even dislikes.  I know I can't please everyone, and I'm not trying to.   I want people to see the Legend series like I do.  Full of promise yet, it was left incomplete.  I'm just trying to complete this and I will never grow as an artist or a person if I hide what I have been working on.

Ok, I'm done now.

Read away

P.S.  Let me know if you can't see it


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#2
These look very promising. Keep up the good work. Smile
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#3
So I read part 1. Can you give me some specific examples (3 to 5) of changes you made and why you made them?

Also, in terms of stealing, as much as I would love to just take an idea and run to a Hollywood executive and make it a movie, that's not how it works. I wouldn't worry about it too much.
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(02-13-2019, 07:49 AM)A Magic Student Wrote: So I read part 1. Can you give me some specific examples (3 to 5) of changes you made and why you made them?

Also, in terms of stealing, as much as I would love to just take an idea and run to a Hollywood executive and make it a movie, that's not how it works. I wouldn't worry about it too much.

I would love to answer all questions.

Stealing as in someone else runs with this idea and post it on some other website that I do not approve.
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#5
Once again, this looks promising! I really like the more light-hearted take on this and the inclusion of Classic characters too. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but other than that, well done!  Big Grin

I do have a question, though. We didn’t see Cynder or the Guardians. Where are they?
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(02-16-2019, 01:01 AM)SarahSpyborg259 Wrote: Once again, this looks promising! I really like the more light-hearted take on this and the inclusion of Classic characters too. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but other than that, well done!  Big Grin

I do have a question, though. We didn’t see Cynder or the Guardians. Where are they?

That was the hardest thing to take out.  I really tried to put them in, but it felt forced and filled.  If put in more characters like the guardians outside the beginning, I didn't have time to develop Spyro.  I had to focus on Spyro more than anything else, and cut what I couldn't see working.

I have plans for a squeal.  And the guardians have a much bugger role in that.

Cynder... I tried so hard to put her in, but I wanted you to understand mentioning her gets fear out of people, building up the battle that they would have.
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#7
OK. Yup, I can understand that.
Is Cynder in your version still a kid corrupted into an adult, or is she a full on adult?
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(02-16-2019, 03:38 AM)SarahSpyborg259 Wrote: OK. Yup, I can understand that.
Is Cynder in your version still a kid corrupted into an adult, or is she a full on adult?

YES
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#9
That wasn’t a yes or no question. What I meant was, in your version, is she the same age as Spyro, or the same age as the Guardians? Likely the former. My apologies if I seem dumb to you.  Sad
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(02-16-2019, 11:13 PM)SarahSpyborg259 Wrote: That wasn’t a yes or no question. What I meant was, in your version, is she the same age as Spyro, or the same age as the Guardians? Likely the former. My apologies if I seem dumb to you.  Sad

That wasn't my intention.  Yes means both. or neither.  I guess I need to post the next one.  Part 1 will be up after part 2, and 3 of this one is down.
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