Spyro movie V.8.9

[AceArcher5532]

Once again, this looks promising! I really like the more light-hearted take on this and the inclusion of Classic characters too. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but other than that, well done! 

I do have a question, though. We didn’t see Cynder or the Guardians. Where are they?

That was the hardest thing to take out.  I really tried to put them in, but it felt forced and filled.  If put in more characters like the guardians outside the beginning, I didn't have time to develop Spyro.  I had to focus on Spyro more than anything else, and cut what I couldn't see working.

I have plans for a squeal.  And the guardians have a much bugger role in that.

Cynder... I tried so hard to put her in, but I wanted you to understand mentioning her gets fear out of people, building up the battle that they would have.